It desperately needs an editor
Posted on: April 7, 2021 at 17:15:25 CT
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it’s passive and weak. “We plan” instead of “we will”. and “most delicious” “to surprise our customers”. it sounds like it was written by the same people who write Chinese menus
and Sunday hours are listed as 12am - 8pm. I’m sure that’s meant to be 12pm.